I would need to edit my script from a final draft into the final submission. As well as editing on the comments, language or additional information/elaboration you think might boost my grades.
FILES TO BE EDITED: FINAL.DOCX & BULLET POINT SUMMARY
BULLET POINT SUMMARY : These summaries need to be more extensive and include passages in order to actually be useful for you.
FINAL : A good start here but you still have some work to do. The main issue here is just that it’s not clear what your main argument about inter-generational trauma is, nor do you clearly explain it. This should be a main focus as you revise and work on the paper. In the intro, you need to clearly explain what your argument is and in each section you need to link back to it to explain how each section is illustrating and proving your argument. There are also a lot of grammatical and phrasing errors here that need to be fixed, so be sure to attend to those as well. You are definitely on the right track, so keep at it, and you’ll have a great final version of your paper!