PROMPT:Describe a historical (or current) event in which an individual or a group of people spoke up and argue whether it had (or will have) positive and/or negative effects on society.
In crafting your response, consider how (through speech, writing, action, demonstration, etc.) and why the individual or group spoke up and analyze the societal consequences (good, bad, expected, unexpected, familiar, unprecedented, small, large) it brought about.
While writing your paper, you may find it helpful to refer to the following chapters in Knowing Language: Chapter 3 (Argumentative Writing), Chapter 11 (Using Sources in Academic Writing), Chapter 12 (Writing Cohesively), Chapter 13 (Revising, Editing, and Polishing Your Writing).
Please revise the essay based on the Paper 2 draft 1-3 that i provided. To revise the essay to have strong and clearer thesis statement. The thesis statement need to be the end of the first paragraph. And for the body paragraph, the essay need two detailed example to support the essay.