Post final draft of WA3 in the D11 forum by 11:59 PM November 21

Someone else on study pool wrote this rough draft but it was not adequate for my teacher so I need someone to fix it based on what she told me to fix which is :

• Thesis: It seems like you are responding to the second prompt, but it’s somewhat vague. What three literary devices are you comparing between the two stories and what is the recurring concept in each? Those components must be clear. As far as behaviors and actions, aren’t they essentially the same thing?
• Make sure that your rhetorical précis summaries closely follow the formula outlined on the Rhetorical Précis instructional guide, exemplified on several samples provided, and carefully reviewed on the Revision Guide for Rhetorical Précis.
• Just fyi, WA3 is an annotated works cited, not bibliography. While the concept is essentially the same, bibliography refers to print texts only. Since you folks are using electronic sources, it is referred to as Annotated Works Cited.

I need someone to fix it completely and make it a respectable final draft.

Below are the directions for the assignment as well as the rough draft.