I have a research paper about Pollution and Global Warming in the US, and I didn’t get a good grade on it.
I need someone who could fix it and make it a strong and good research paper.
My instructor said:
What is your thesis?
I’m unsure of your organization here. The first two pages seems to just be background info, and nothing that’s making a strong argument yet.
Most of this is just a summary of information, and not really a strong argument. How can you include more of a personal argument in this paper?
I have attached my research and a revision document.
I NEED HELP!!