1. The introduction and the causes have a little bit long.The length for the introduction and the causes should be around two to three pages.(maximum three pages). The key part of the AP is the solution.You should focus more on the solution.
2.please make sure that write and revise the paper based on all the points and the comments that professor gave
3. The length for the full draft is 2500 words (we have 1900 right now)and please check the requirements, prompt and the sample carefully