These are two pages of a persuasive research essay on why Syrian refugees should be allowed to come into the U.S., with the goal of humanizing refugees as persons instead of terrorists (and why the link between the two is very low) as well as counter-arguing any form of opposition mainly coming from Americans that oppose their coming. However, many think that this came off rather confusing, with too much high vocabulary, and in terms of explaining my points.
Please keep the length approximately the same, and add any desired or necessary revisions of your own, for instance adding more supporting information, but primarily re-wording this for a freshmen in college.
The whole essay is available if you would like for your better understanding, but only the two pages highlighted in black frames must be fixed. That is all.